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Post by Thorgrimm Halfdane on Jul 20, 2004 3:57:31 GMT -5
:)Just a poem to enjoy.... THE PASSAGE OF NIGHT. The room is dark a candle burns into the night he sits silently his long gnarled fingers work deftly a light flickers on his face an old aged face criss-crossed with wrinkles and coloured deeply with a rusty tan now fading a rough unkempt beard stained with tobacco is outlined with the shadow revealing the weatherbeaten features of this solitary figure he works on oblivious to all else an air of serenity surrounds him a kind, loving warmth penetrating the darkness his internal peace overruling his harsh, ugly appearance a sigh breaks the stillness a tired, fatigued sigh as the weary sea-captain drifts off into a deep slumber the darkness engulfing him as the candle burns out and the night turns into day. ...and I hope you did T.
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Post by Halethala on Jul 20, 2004 9:16:22 GMT -5
*Smiles* you paint well with few words a nice sketch of this man . . anyone we know? *g*
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Post by Dream Loxley on Jul 20, 2004 9:34:24 GMT -5
Another man with a wonderful way with words.....welcome to our boards and the friendships herein
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Post by Thorgrimm Halfdane on Jul 20, 2004 21:32:25 GMT -5
Thanks, "I seek no recognition, no nation wide acclaim I have no fond ambition for wide poetic fame Forsooth I find the only care is the pleasure I've attained I write because the rhythm's there that cannot be restrained And if one simple cheerful tale can bring but one wee smile Although my fame and fortune fail Then it is all worthwhile." Richard Magoffin "We Bushies"...... Anyone you know? The old man was (very) loosely based on my grandfather. I'll post another shortly. T.
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Post by Thorgrimm Halfdane on Jul 22, 2004 1:54:00 GMT -5
Here's another ...... [uTHROUGH THE EYES OF A CHILD. [/u] Skyrockets in flight, Witches ride broomsticks through the night. Cannons thundering aloud, From galleons afloat on a sea of cloud. Climb upon a winding stair, Find the giant who lives up there. Sparkling rainbows in a mist, Glisten in eyes by faeries kissed. Mounted on a wooden steed, Is a noble knight in word and deed. A forest full of mossy knolls, Can hide elves and goblins dwarves and trolls. Strive to save the maiden fair, Slay the dragon in his fiery lair. Fashioned by many willing hands, Huge castles bake on the summer sands. Indians are creeping through the grass, To catch the cowboys at the hayshed pass. Grab a spade but take a sword, Search the beach for a pirate’s horde. There’s Venus, Saturn, Jupiter and Mars, Fly a rocket ship to explore the stars. Imagination to split worlds asunder, Through the eyes of a child it’s all magic and wonder. [/pre] ........ a child's imagination is a powerful thing and should nurtured always. T.
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Post by Thorgrimm Halfdane on Jul 22, 2004 2:03:14 GMT -5
*Scratches head* Well, that didn't come out quite the way I wanted! Guess I'll just have to keep trying. T.
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Post by Lady Edfeil on Jul 22, 2004 6:12:36 GMT -5
*smiles and just enjoys the words* It's becomming a treat to me to read your poetry. Your style in poetry remind me of someone dear to me that I miss.
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Post by Thorgrimm Halfdane on Jul 22, 2004 6:52:55 GMT -5
My dear Lady Edfeil, I'm glad that you are enjoying them "... if one simple cheerful tale can bring but one wee smile..." The following poem was written by my Grandmother ..... WON WRON. Gently the sun touches the distant scene In wraith-like strands through drifts of mist The dark tree trunks, like scored totems gleam And chartreuse gum tops, sun-kissed Bow to the hills. Off-white clouds like galleons are trailing Ephemeral shadows on lichened willows. Far, in eucalypt-banked hills birds are hailing The sun; and silhouetted in murky shallows Egrets stand still. Nearer, the old horse in bracken glances As, under the haystack’s mossy cover The breeze, like possums holding court dances, And exultant children chase piglets Laughing their fill. She didn't write many poems, but this is one of my favourites ... WonWron is a place in country Victoria (Australia) near where my Grandparent's (now my Uncle's) farm is located. (PS: The second W is silent - Won(W)ron) Enjoy :DT.
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Post by Dream Loxley on Jul 22, 2004 7:18:40 GMT -5
I continue to be amazed at the depth of talent surrounding me here.....its wonderful to read of others writing, either in story form or poetry and verse. Often I have stated how I look forward to reading our boards....and I am reminded daily as to the reasons why.
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Post by PoetLover on Jul 22, 2004 8:51:14 GMT -5
Oh! Won Wron is simply enchanting! Your talents come from a lovely heritage, Thorgrimm . .
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Post by Thorgrimm Halfdane on Jul 22, 2004 19:49:11 GMT -5
... And now for something a bit different. I have always liked this piece .... Breathe deep the gathering gloom Watch lights fade in every room Bedsitter people look back and lament Another day's useless energy is spent.
Impassioned lovers wrestle as one Lonely man cries for love and has none New mother picks up and suckles her son Senior citizens wish they were young.
Cold hearted orb rules the night Removes the colours from our sight Red is grey and yellow white But we decide which is right.
And what is ... an illusion.from "Nights in White Satin" by The Moody BluesI am currently working on a new poem, I will post it in here when I have finished it. T. "If you have never been amazed by the very fact that you exist, you are squandering the greatest gift of all"
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Post by Dream Loxley on Jul 23, 2004 3:24:02 GMT -5
I love those words.....superb album! showing my age now ;D Twilight Time
Twilight time to dream awhile In vales of deepening blue As fantasy strides over colourful skies, The form disappearing from view. In twilight time Dream with me awhile
A nightingale plays a dark mellow phrase Of notes that are rich and so true. An aerial display by the firefly brigade Dancing to tunes no-one knew.
In twilight time Dream with me awhile
In twilight time Dream with me awhile
Building castles in the air, Whistling to the wind As nature bows down her head, See what tomorrow brings.
Twilight time, Dream with me awhile.
Bats take to wing like puppets on string, Prancing through cool evening air. In a sightless glide, no reason to hide From a wave of the sun's blinding stare.
(From The Album..... Day's of Future Past)
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Post by Thorgrimm Halfdane on Jul 23, 2004 7:46:04 GMT -5
I have that album "Twilight Time" ... reminds me of a song, by Andy Williams, that my parents used to sing .... (now who's showing their age? ) Here's another of mine ...... MOONRISE. Enthralled. I am drawn to the rising moon, Its enchantment binds me. A rapt spectator, I watch as the drama of its moods unfolds. The magic gathers me. Shy moons of Spring. White gold. Rising coy from the shadowing mists. Quiet and delicate, above the awakening land. Bushfire moons of Summer. Orange red. Bursting hot through the shimmering haze. Huge and misshapen, in the dust and sweat. Tranquil moons of Autumn. Yellow gold. Lifting bright over the ripening harvests. Broad and confident, as the season mellows. Lonely moons of Winter. Brilliant ivory. Shivering cold against an ink black sky. Stark and icy, silver frosting the valleys. Peaceful. Each moon has its own symphony. Their subtleties calm me, I find joy and clarity to melt my confusions. A fine music surrounds me. :DT. ..It is almost impossible to watch a sunset and not dream..
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Post by Dream Loxley on Jul 23, 2004 8:04:10 GMT -5
*Chuckles at Andy Williams* Wonders if you remember his 'Love Story' song ;D Really enjoying your words.....
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Post by Thorgrimm Halfdane on Jul 23, 2004 17:37:45 GMT -5
;DNow, hang on .... I said that I could remember my parents singing it, I'm not THAT old!! Just thinking .......... The time of my life. As I age, I refuse to deny my years. When asked my age, I will always admit to the correct number, whatever it may be. For what year, or years, could I subtract? The one when I watched in wonder as Man landed on the Moon? Perhaps the year I fell in love with my wife? Or those years when my sons were born and I felt such amazement as I held them for that first time? How about those less favourable? Like the year when I was seriously ill? Or one of those grief-filled years spent saying goodbye to some-one? Maybe I could choose the seemingly insignificant. That year I saw a falling star? Or the one spent not so much enthralled with my life, just content with it? No, I’ll keep them all - the good, the bad and the not so memorable. To deny any one of them would be to deny myself. Because when added up, they are my life. ;)T.
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